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11am
the office is slow
today the clicks
sound less often

12pm
the girls laugh
miming last night
over cubicle walls
their pretty boyfriends
and loyal cats
fill the space
between ringless fingers

1pm
the air-conditioner exhales
after six months
holding its breath
silence suddenly has a voice
:icon007-seriously-serial:

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:iconyouinventedme:
love the concept. the last bit if my favorite.

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one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:icongetyourgrip:
last stanza is the best~ :peace:

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Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:icongetyourgrip:
of course

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Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:iconnightgrid:
that middle stanza...ouchies... the emptiness is haunting. This piece reminds me of a silent movie.

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March 27, 2009
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