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i rarely touch
those seven digits
that make the voice
on the other end
yours
"this isn't working"
"we have to talk"

It is really hard to bring yourself to those cliche words sometimes. . .
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here. Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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toxic-nebulae Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student Writer
I'd consider changing "digits" to "buttons" (as digits are concepts that you can't really touch) but other than that, I like this.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! Just a note to let you know that I've featured this piece in my journal :)
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megsamirafauth Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
;-; I kno this feels.
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Hearts and hugs for you my friend!
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megsamirafauth Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
Thank you. <3
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AlterEgo1629 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I really love this.
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I appreciate the love!
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your fantastic work has been featured here!
I'd really appreciate it if you could give some love to the other features and :+fav: the article! :heart:
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Thank you!
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so glad you are on my list, your work and the correlation in it makes me happy. :)
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007-BloodyAlaizabel Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2008
Relatable and beautiful. And to think it only took you a few lines to make such a strong message.
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:icon007-seriously-serial:
why thank you for for your interest in my work!
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007-BloodyAlaizabel Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2008
Welcome :D
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007-LaHamletta Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2008
I know what you mean, man. Good job.
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cypriphobia Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2008  Student Writer
Very simple, but strong. I like this very much.
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007-seriously-serial Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2008
thank you!!
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:icon007-fleetingpassions:
This is beautiful.
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:icon007-seriously-serial:
why thank you!!
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